Don't be nice, tell me how you really feel.
I read this paper twice and went back over parts of it several times. I was reminded of why I do not like evaluating work at this stage of the process every time I wrote a marginal comment or made a "mental note." You have a grant to do the research and have defended the work successfully. Nevertheless, I will address candidly the ideas you lay out in the paper.
Maybe I'm a traditionalist, but "Fuck you," just seems so much more straightforward.